After I Watched TED
In writing class, we watched TED video. It was about the children. Speaker's name was Adora Svitak. She had very good presentation about the children. She said she loves to write, so she writes books,too. At 4 years old, she loved writing. Then at 6 years old, her mother bought her own laptop. In her presentation, I received a deep impression.First thing that I had good impression was about the relationship between kids and adults. In her presentation, she said she thinks adults have to listen to kids and learn from kids. I think that made me have deep impressions. Sometimes I also think that mean adults have to listen and learn from young kids because their generations are different. Many adults have to listen to and learn from kids. Also, she tells us about the relationship between the teacher and students.
Secondly, she said that when kids grow up, they will become adults. When the kids become adults like now, they will become improved adults, better than those now. Many adults have to give many kids hopeful thoughts. Adults have to give a hopeful mind to growing kids to make them improve.
Third, she said 'You must lend an ear today, because we are the leaders of tomorrow'. I think this was very good. It means you have to hear very carefully because we are the leaders of tommorrow. Mant kids would be leaders tommorrow, so you have to listen carefully us. Childrens need opportunities to be successful. I thinks its very good advice to all people.Adora Svitak
I think Adora Svitak had very good presentation. I agreed with her opinions,too. Children will be good leaders next day when adults give them a good hopeful thinking. I had really deep impressions in her presentation. I hope i can be a good leaders next days. Also i hope many kids will be a good leaders.
In your response, you only use Adora Svitak's name at the end; you should use her name in your introduction paragraph first.
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Overall, I think you have really thought about what you heard from Miss Svitak, and you have presented your thoughts clearly.